tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4772222194742528670.post7853886643909479954..comments2023-05-20T14:27:54.997+03:00Comments on Poeme pe retina: Sakura ( 2 )Doru Emanuelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12287758529916963086noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4772222194742528670.post-11149986232564673812011-11-08T22:43:17.861+02:002011-11-08T22:43:17.861+02:00Parerea mea e ca versul al doilea "barba buni...Parerea mea e ca versul al doilea "barba bunicuţului" nu e inspirata. De ce? Are o balbaiala. suna rau alaturarea "barba bu". Apoi, nu cred ca suna normal alintul "bunicutului" in haiku. Eu cred in sobrietatea acestul gen de poezie.<br /><br />Maria TirenescuMaria Tirenescuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04321209189595912377noreply@blogger.com